Comments on: Freewriting Panic Attack: Holding Myself Up Normal http://luzmcosta.com/2010/01/holding-myself-up-normal/#utm_source=feed&utm_medium=feed&utm_campaign=feed a rape survivor's narrative Sat, 05 Jun 2010 14:20:44 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Luz http://luzmcosta.com/2010/01/holding-myself-up-normal/comment-page-1/#comment-394 Luz Sat, 30 Jan 2010 06:25:15 +0000 http://luzmcosta.com/?p=831#comment-394 I missed a comma after “there.” It should read “Yet, there, on the border...” See? Horrible, unforgivable mistakes. I’ll ignore the uncommon use of “indoctrinates" as a noun. I’ll even yield to your point; rare gems do emerge from me. But it’s too rare, I think. I missed a comma after “there.” It should read “Yet, there, on the border…”

See? Horrible, unforgivable mistakes. I’ll ignore the uncommon use of “indoctrinates” as a noun. I’ll even yield to your point; rare gems do emerge from me. But it’s too rare, I think.

]]> By: Clara http://luzmcosta.com/2010/01/holding-myself-up-normal/comment-page-1/#comment-391 Clara Fri, 22 Jan 2010 14:44:36 +0000 http://luzmcosta.com/?p=831#comment-391 "Yet, there on the border of Normality, stands this army of Manifest Destiny indoctrinates puppeted by Bootstrap Bill Americano, high on justice for us." If this doesn't prove that you should dedicate yourself to something, I don't know what would. This sentence just slaps in you the face, word after word. Beautifully written, you have a talent that you need to dedicate yourself to. “Yet, there on the border of Normality, stands this army of Manifest Destiny indoctrinates puppeted by Bootstrap Bill Americano, high on justice for us.”

If this doesn’t prove that you should dedicate yourself to something, I don’t know what would. This sentence just slaps in you the face, word after word. Beautifully written, you have a talent that you need to dedicate yourself to.

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